Comments on: One’s Ship http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/ Lay yourself down to sleep with the soothing soporific of Miette's purr as she reads you the world's greatest short stories and delivers them podcasterly. Thu, 09 Feb 2012 16:21:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Bart Midwood http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-976 Bart Midwood Tue, 22 Jul 2008 05:12:11 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-976 "one's ship" read aloud by author: www.bartmidwood.com “one’s ship” read aloud by author:

http://www.bartmidwood.com

]]> By: Bart Midwood http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-350 Bart Midwood Thu, 13 Sep 2007 23:33:58 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-350 Hi Miette -- yesterday I sent you a message about my story "one's ship" -- the ms you read from has material that had been deleted from the final version -- you can find that version in my story collection "phantoms" -- if you cannot get a copy of that, let me know, and give me an email address to contact, and I will send you the correct version in an attached file -- thanks again for an intelligent reading -- it surprised me -- yours, bart midwood Hi Miette — yesterday I sent you a message about my story “one’s ship” — the ms you read from has material that had been deleted from the final version — you can find that version in my story collection “phantoms” — if you cannot get a copy of that, let me know, and give me an email address to contact, and I will send you the correct version in an attached file –
thanks again for an intelligent reading — it surprised me –
yours,
bart midwood

]]> By: Bart Midwood http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-349 Bart Midwood Thu, 13 Sep 2007 02:06:53 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-349 hi miette -- I like your voice and the way you read my story "one's ship" -- one problem, tho -- you must have read it from an early unedited ms -- the sentence with the word "shithead", as well as a few other sentences, were deleted in the final authorized version in my story-collection titled "phantoms" (e.p.dutton, 1970) -- please check it out -- the word "shithead" in the context of this particular tale is jarring and misplaced and I hope you will see fit to edit your recording accordingly -- all the same, thanks for a good and intelligent reading -- really ... thank you very, very much -- this is a good thing you're doing -- forward march, bart -- hi miette –
I like your voice and the way you read my story “one’s ship” — one problem, tho — you must have read it from an early unedited ms — the sentence with the word “shithead”, as well as a few other sentences, were deleted in the final authorized version in my story-collection titled “phantoms” (e.p.dutton, 1970) — please check it out — the word “shithead” in the context of this particular tale is jarring and misplaced and I hope you will see fit to edit your recording accordingly — all the same, thanks for a good and intelligent reading — really … thank you very, very much — this is a good thing you’re doing –
forward march,
bart –

]]> By: miette http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-348 miette Tue, 13 Mar 2007 01:25:03 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-348 Keen ears on you anon and your assessment is right on-- with fancy new audio boxes with lots of flickery lights and knobs, the temptation for thorough Goofing Off sometimes proves unassailable. Kiwi: the story ends in mid-sentence because in the 1960s, experimental fiction writers were sometimes easily distracted, or sometimes just did things like end stories in mid-sentence for the sake of experimental fiction. Johnny: thanks for noticing. -- Mtte. Keen ears on you anon and your assessment is right on– with fancy new audio boxes with lots of flickery lights and knobs, the temptation for thorough Goofing Off sometimes proves unassailable.

Kiwi: the story ends in mid-sentence because in the 1960s, experimental fiction writers were sometimes easily distracted, or sometimes just did things like end stories in mid-sentence for the sake of experimental fiction.

Johnny: thanks for noticing.

– Mtte.

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-347 Anonymous Sun, 11 Mar 2007 09:16:01 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-347 Sounds too like you were experimenting with the audio again. Seemed to be a bit low in volume, and a bit muffled, like you had tried applying some sort of noise supression a bit too liberally. I don't know that's what it was, but that is what it reminds me of. Sounds too like you were experimenting with the audio again. Seemed to be a bit low in volume, and a bit muffled, like you had tried applying some sort of noise supression a bit too liberally. I don’t know that’s what it was, but that is what it reminds me of.

]]> By: Kiwi C. http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-346 Kiwi C. Sat, 10 Mar 2007 09:37:24 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-346 Did all of this story get uploaded? The version that got downloaded to my server cut off in mid-sentence. Is it really only 13 minutes long? Did all of this story get uploaded? The version that got downloaded to my server cut off in mid-sentence. Is it really only 13 minutes long?

]]> By: johnny http://www.miettecast.com/2007/03/07/ones-ship/comment-page-1/#comment-345 johnny Sat, 10 Mar 2007 01:14:28 +0000 http://www.miettecast.com/?p=160#comment-345 happy two year anniversary! happy two year anniversary!

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